It has rings
or layers of
plink and plunk.
Hands around a tidy,
square box.
Bring it down
tip it :
A big seed rolling,
one stone sliding
or, open to find
a shell shaping white.
Outside is striped in colors
the lid stamped
by a mystery face;
the saving and hiding
of secrets has begun.
Friday, July 30, 2010
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fun 55...i think...i get a little scared of secrets and what they might hold...nice 55...
ReplyDeleteawesome, izzy!! the progression builds with anticipation and leaves me solidly where i am, stopped.
ReplyDeletei love it!!
amazing job,
ReplyDeletelove the little movements or actions...
Izzy...
ReplyDeleteI've been hoarding Secrets for years.
I totally relate to this 55.
Loved your Story.
Thanks for playing today, and have a Kick Ass Week-End...G
Everyone has secrets locked in somewhere!
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